The Halfway Diner by John Sayles

First published: 1987

Type of plot: Social realism

Time of work: The late twentieth century

Locale: An arid region of the southern United States

Principal Characters:

  • Lourdes, the narrator, the wife of a prison inmate
  • Lee, a passenger on the bus
  • Delphine, a passenger and friend of Lee's
  • Mrs. Tucker, the eldest passenger
  • Pam, a newcomer to the bus

The Story

A group of women, diverse in age and ethnicity, travel by bus each weekend to visit their husbands and lovers in prison. Their round-trip journey takes twelve hours, and they are allowed only one hour of visiting time. Spending more time traveling than visiting, they get to know one another better than they know their men.

As the women board for departure, Lourdes notices Pam, a young blond, visibly anxious in her search for a seat. Lourdes, a Mexican American, sarcastically refers to Pam as Goldilocks but is kind enough to warn Pam against her first choice: Renee's usual seat. Renee travels with a display case of cosmetics to sell to her companions; her seat also serves as her place of business.

Lourdes offers Pam the seat by her own. Their ensuing dialogue sketches a portrait of prison wife etiquette—for example, it is allowable to ask the length of a man's sentence, but to ask what his crime was is considered too personal. Lourdes introduces others as they arrive, such as Mrs. Tucker, who has traveled this route every weekend for thirty years, and Lee and Delphine, two nurses who enjoy an atypical crossracial friendship. In a big-sisterly way, Lourdes is amused by Pam's naïveté and enjoys the diversion that she offers from the tedium of the long bus ride. There are awkward stretches of silence, however, and when the bus stops for lunch, there is a noticeable air of relief.

The Halfway Diner takes its name from the motto of its owner, Elvira: "Everyplace on earth is halfway between somewhere and somewhere else." The diner is halfway between the prison and the women's point of departure, and the bus routinely stops there en route and on return. It is a typical, 1950's-style eatery located on a lonely stretch of desert highway. Elvira welcomes the sudden onslaught of customers to her otherwise sparsely occupied diner. She knows everyone except Pam by name, shuffling them through the process of ordering lunch like a gum-snapping schoolmarm. Pam has brought sandwiches for her husband, which Lourdes tells her she will not be allowed to give him. Instead of eating them herself, she follows the crowd in ordering from the menu by number.

During the prison visit, everyone but Pam learns that Lee's husband has stabbed Delphine's husband in a racially motivated fight the previous day. The return trip is rife with tension, as Lee and Delphine avoid each other so conspicuously as to effect an overall chill. Disappointed to find Lee sitting next to Lourdes, Pam takes the seat beside Delphine. She wants to talk about her impressions of the prison, but Delphine snaps that she is not interested in her problems. The bus ride continues in silence until reaching the Halfway Diner. Pam is relieved to be able to sit with Lourdes again at the restaurant, and finally to be told the reason for everyone's tense behavior.

Mrs. Tucker suddenly collapses, and it is up to Lee and Delphine to deal with the emergency until an ambulance arrives. Once the situation is under control, everyone reboards for the final leg of the trip. Lee and Delphine take their normal places beside each other, while Pam and Lourdes are also reunited, directly behind them. An air of apparent normalcy resumes between them, along with a deflated sense of resignation that they are not ultimately friends in any normal way, that perhaps they are no more than two nurses estranged from their petty criminal husbands.